After thinking about it, let’s make a speech.

I said before opening the book that this book is a sequel or a preface to the previous book.

But I seem to have done neither.

In the first part, I made a lot of deletions, including two big lines. The remaining Shirley lines and those written by Zhu Fu Jingguang were also rubbish, and the Gin line was not done at all. The ones I wrote before

The BOSS line was deleted by my subsequent modifications.

In the sequel, as you have seen, some characters did not appear at all, and I did not write much about the scenes of the original protagonist group. This is also the reason for the establishment of the protagonist's identity. I wrote his identity too high, which led to the release of the other characters.

of.

If I were writing about an ordinary person, the effect might be good.

Another problem is that I can't write the original series at all. It's not that I don't know how to write it, but that I don't understand it.

When I wrote the original series, I just stuffed the protagonist into it and recited a few lines from the original characters. There was no innovation, the writing was extremely stiff, and it was not interesting at all.

Original plot - It's the same thing, I set the protagonist's identity too high.

The protagonist's character is: very wise, almost demonic, able to guess all situations, and can read memories.

It seems pretty awesome, but this leads to the fact that the protagonist will solve everything he encounters, and the tension of the little characters is not reflected at all.

Such a role is still suitable as a supporting role.

After I finish writing this book, I may not write another book. My self-confidence has been greatly damaged, and I am no longer in the mood to practice writing.

However, this book is not without its merits.

At least...well...I seem to have done a good job in writing the psychological emotions of the characters, that is, the part about Miyano Shiho.

Of course, that's the only one.

For the rest, I was in such a bad mood at that time that I couldn't write about my state at that time.

The advantages are gradually disappearing.

If I could do it all over again, I would definitely write a protagonist with a surprisingly high status.
Chapter completed!