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By the way, I've been reflecting recently.

1. Many people report that the protagonist is too restricted by the system and has no freedom. This may be a problem with my writing style. I will try to modify it later to make everyone feel more smooth. Later, it will make everyone feel that the protagonist does not do something because of the task, but when the protagonist wants to do something, the task comes.

In this case, it may be easier for everyone to accept it. The purpose is to highlight the protagonist and the task, and who is the leader!

The mission exists just to cheat the protagonist!

2. The nickname issue of the protagonist.

Many people say that I acted too deliberately, and there are indeed some of this, and I will pay attention to it later.

Actually, I mainly want to reflect that the protagonist is a person with personality defects. Because of personality defects, he is considered a living person.

If he has no personality defects, he is too perfect, and he is not like a person.

Maybe I wrote it too deliberately.

I will try to pay attention to this later.

3. In fact, whether a book can be supported until the end is not only related to the author, but also to the readers. I can only keep the general direction and style unchanged. If there is a problem with the details, it is actually difficult for me to notice.

So I hope someone can point it out at this time.

If you point it out, I think it is correct, I will make changes. So far, the details of the previous article have been revised several times, all for keeping them smoother.

Before coming to Jiangcheng, it also changed slightly, and it was changed to the protagonist who came to Jiangcheng on his own initiative, not because of the task, and the task only appeared later.

Because I think it may be better for everyone to accept it if you change it like this.

So, dear guys, the creation of a book requires me and you to work hard together!

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