Wang Zixu asked: "How do you feel?"

Ye Lan said: "Well..."

Wang Zixu asked: "Isn't it exciting enough?"

Ye Lan said: "Well... let me take it slow first."

Wang Zixu said: "It's okay, there's no need to reserve anything. If you have any opinions, just say them. I can bear it."

Ye Lan threw the manuscript paper on the table: "This is the first time I have read such a long piece of literature. How do you want me to comment? I don't understand!"

Wang Zixu said patiently: "What I'm looking for is an amateur like you. You just need to tell me based on your instinct whether it looks good or not, and do you want to continue watching?"

Ye Lan looked confused: "I don't know if it's good or not. This is my first time reading this kind of literature book. In fact, I couldn't understand it for a long time at first, but somehow I persisted and read so many books. So you ask me

Is it good-looking or not... I think it should be good-looking, right?"

On this day, Wang Zixu asked Ye Lan to meet, and she came excitedly. She put on a white short-sleeved sweater that she had never worn before, a black polka-dot dress, gray stockings wrapped around her legs, and a pair of slopes at her feet.

With leather shoes.

When they arrived at the appointed coffee shop to meet, Wang Zixu turned around and took out a stack of manuscript paper that was so big that she fainted, saying that he wanted her to review it. Ye Lan saw the densely packed words on the manuscript paper, and immediately left her with many years of compulsory education.

She had a panic attack, and after a long time of persuasion by Wang Zixu, she finally read tens of thousands of words in one go.

Ye Lan complained: "I really don't understand, why do you want me to read it? Don't you have many friends who are engaged in literature? Why don't you invite them to read it?"

Wang Zixu said: "My book does not lack professional opinions. I hope that it can be enjoyed by ordinary readers and even people who do not read. It is like Bai Juyi every time he finished writing a poem, he would give it to the old woman.

Look, the request he gave himself was 'the old woman can understand it'."

Ye Lan asked curiously: "What is an old woman?"

"It's the old aunt."

Ye Lan got angry: "You said I'm an old aunt?"

"This is a metaphor, a metaphor," Wang Zixu quickly explained, "and I've shown it to them a long time ago."

Ye Lan asked: "Have they all seen it? Ning Cainv, Lin Feng, have they all seen it?"

"right."

Ye Lan raised her voice: "Does that mean you gave it to me last?"

"I don't rule out that I will meet new suitable candidates in the future, and I will show them to others."

Ye Lan took a big gulp of coffee and put down the cup: "I'm so angry!"

Wang Zixu had no idea what kind of anger she was angry at, and it was a bit inexplicable.

Wang Zixu prepared a revision notebook for his "Chinese version of "One Hundred Years of Solitude". Every time he showed it to a friend, he would write down the omissions and errors that should be corrected. Now, he has written down hundreds of pages.

When he showed it to Lin Feng earlier, he held the manuscript paper in his hands, frowned for a long time, and pondered for a long time before saying:

"The previous modification looked perfect, but when it came to the spy battle part, it felt weird."

Wang Zixu felt nervous: "What's wrong?"

Lin Feng said: "This Shen Ci, what is his motivation? Why does he keep obstructing the protagonist? Although it is very exciting, but when I think about it carefully, I find that it cannot stand up to scrutiny, and I feel that the whole story is very flamboyant and not as exciting as the previous ones."

Wang Zixu was silent for a while and said: "I have written before that Shen Ci had a personal plot, but it was later deleted because there were too many words."

Lin Feng said: "I think it's better to add it, otherwise I always feel that this character can't stand up, so it's better not to write it at all."

Wang Zixu said: "There is a very important turning point behind this that is related to this person. I really had to write about it."

Lin Feng said: "Then let's add it."

Wang Zixu wrote it down in his notebook and said, "Yes, the more you change the words, the more words you add."

Lin Feng said: "Don't think about the word count. I read your book in one sitting and found it very good and inspiring. I think this is our Chinese version of "One Hundred Years of Solitude". To say it is weird is to be picky, because this part The plot is very compact, but if you think about it carefully, it will feel fake. I think it would be better to have more words, but also to polish it better."

Wang Zixu said seriously: "I want this book to be a book that can be read more than once, so this problem must be solved. But the key is, even if this plot is added, I am not sure whether it can achieve the effect I want. .”

Lin Feng said: "Don't worry, there is still time now, you change it first, I will help you look at it as soon as I have time."

Wang Zixu asked: "Aren't you going to win the Feishi Literary Award?"

Lin Feng smiled bitterly: "I tried a novel before, but it was a mess and I was embarrassed to write it out. I am more suitable for reportage. Soon the Reporting Society Literature Award will be announced, and I plan to compete for this award."

Wang Zixu felt pity, but also understood his choice and patted his shoulder: "The subject you are studying is also very meaningful."

Lin Feng said: "No, my works are not as meaningful as yours. Your works are broader and can touch deeper issues in society more deeply."

After speaking, he sighed: "You must complete this work well. I have a hunch that this work will not only have a huge impact on you personally, but also on the entire society."

The prince smiled and said: "I accept your good words, I hope it will have a positive impact."

Lin Feng said: "By the way, you can also send it to Ning Cainv for help."

When the Ning Chun Banquet was mentioned, Wang Zixu felt a headache. When Lin Feng saw that he was silent, he asked: "What's wrong? Are you arguing?"

Wang Zixu was surprised and said: "quarrel?"

Is his relationship with Ning Chunyan good enough to "quarrel"? In Lin Feng's eyes, is their relationship so close?

This shocked him.

Lin Feng smiled mysteriously: "It's nothing. Show it to her, her opinion will definitely be more professional than mine."

Wang Zixu said: "I showed it to her. Her evaluation was okay..."

He hesitated to speak. What troubled him was not this manuscript, but the Little Prince's manuscript that was to be submitted to the "New Award" magazine.

The manuscript was almost finished, but he didn't know who to give it to for comments.

Ning Chunyan will definitely not put forward any opinions. She has a filter. As long as it is a manuscript submitted by the little prince, she will say "good, good". She has said it before in the magazine, even if the manuscript submitted is a collection of slutty words

, she can also publish it as prose.

Besides her, he could also give the manuscript to Cheng Xing or a poet, but they also have filters. What's more, he doesn't want to talk to them about things other than work, which would increase the risk of exposure.

Then, the remaining candidates are very limited.

So, he placed a new stack of manuscript paper in front of Ye Lan.

Ye Lan stared: "What is this?"

"Please help me read another novel," Wang Zixu said. "This one is not long, only ten or twenty thousand words, and it is very easy. Please give me some opinions after reading it."

Ye Lan was furious: "10,000 to 20,000 words is not long? Even 500-word Chinese reading comprehension materials feel long to me!"

Wang Zixu comforted him and said, "You don't need to read and understand this. You just need to feel it, and then tell me what you think."

Ye Lan turned his head.

Wang Zixu leaned over and whispered, "I'll treat you to milk tea."

"If I don't drink, everyone will get fat."

"Then you can ask for whatever you want. As long as I can afford it, I will give it to you in return."

Ye Lan became happy: "This is what you said! I have a Yves Saint Laurent lipstick that I have been eyeing for a long time. Buy it for me."

Wang Zixu nodded quickly and said, "OK, OK, OK." Only then did Ye Lan pick up his manuscript.

The tone of this article is indeed completely different from the previous one.

The background of the story takes place on a university campus. The male protagonist is a young man who is confused, lies, has an awkward personality, is narcissistic and has low self-esteem.

He is very smart, has out-of-the-box ideas, is talented, has read many books, understands many truths, and is arrogant in giving advice. But he is cowardly and lazy, and has never implemented an idea and persisted. Therefore, when asked about his achievements, he is often dumb.

Speechless. Just like many young college students.

One day, he met a girl.

This girl is strong, sincere, and has no pretense or kitsch. She understands all his humor and his inner arrogance and cowardice. If he has read a thousand books, then she has read two thousand; if he has watched a thousand movies,

Then she has read two thousand movies; if he pretends to be something that is difficult for ordinary people to understand, she will pretend to be something even more incomprehensible.

About thirty people pursued her, and she fell in love with two of them, but the duration did not last more than a week. Her biggest hobby was reading poetry, but she was not smart enough to write it; her biggest worry was that she only had

B cup; what she looks forward to most is the emergence of a decent person who can understand her world.

Ye Lan turned the page.

Seeing this, she probably guessed the next plot: this should be a campus love story, this boy will definitely chase this girl, and then he will have a lot of trouble.

Although she guessed the next plot, she was still pushed by a mysterious force to continue reading. The male and female protagonists were very good, and she felt very involved.

However, this story is not an ordinary romantic comedy. What follows is a super development that makes Ye Lan stunned:

After the male protagonist completely messed up an event and was about to lose the heroine, he activated his super power and returned to the past.

The male protagonist has the ability to go back to the past. He once tried to use this ability to live a perfect life, but soon he discovered that the world is too complicated, and sometimes what seems perfect is often a trap disguised beautifully. For this, he must

He kept going back until his memory became confused. Then one day he suddenly discovered that he was aging.

So he lay down, and instead of spending his limited life in a complicated world, it was better to stay in school. So he kept looking back and changing schools every four years until he met the heroine.

Ye Lan continued reading.

Sure enough, the male protagonist's calculations went as expected. He thought that he had the authority of God and it would be easy to win a girl's heart, but he didn't expect that he messed up again and again.
To be continued...