Chapter 45 Don’t offend the novel writer (second update)

Author: Lost Dragon

Chapter 45 Don’t offend the novel writer (second update)

Song Huanxi didn't know about Guo Yunchen's change of mentality.

Although she had decided to put her pen down temporarily, after receiving a reply from Mr. Wine and Story, which had been renamed No Wine No Joy, she still couldn't help but ask for advice and shared "The Story of the Wonton Shop" with Rongchang's opinion on rejecting the manuscript.

, and mailed them together.

Of course, Song Huanxi had re-copied Rongchang's rejection letter - she had a subtle mentality about Mr. Chou's family scandal not to be publicized.

One day later, Song Huanxi received a reply that was neither drunk nor happy.

"Hello, Miss Yixiao, your words are as clear as your face.

I have read both the manuscript and the letter, and I think the other party’s comments are very appropriate.

Your writing style and literary talent are all impressive, and the characters you created are also very fleshed out."

Song Huanxi was so happy that what the hero saw was indeed the same!

The comments given to her by Mr. Drunken and Happy were exactly the same as Mr. Ugly!

"However--"

The topic of no drinking or happiness changed:

"What's your story?

Indeed, I saw Brother Fugui, I saw Atubo, and I also saw a shadow sitting in the corner drinking coffee——

Just when I was looking forward to what story would happen between them, you ended it?"

Song Huanxi frowned. The evaluation of "No Drinking" and "Mr. Ugly" were still the same, but she was a little confused.

Story? Brother Ah Sheng and Uncle Ah Shui, with their rich experiences, don’t they count as stories?

The advice given by Mr. Chouzi was to watch more movies. She had already planned for this: when the training class starts tomorrow, she would ask Director Zou and Mr. Pei if there was a movie screening room or something like that!

Rongchang Pictures has the same facilities, so the Pei family, who are equally matched, should also have them, right?

I wonder what kind of advice Mr. No-wine would give -

Song Huanxi couldn't wait to read on:

"Take your book "The Story of Wonton Shop" as an example.

Among them, Atub's experience can be written as an independent story.

For example, after Atubu succeeds in his career and retires, and his son arouses public anger, will there be a scene like this: Neighbors who are shopping will complain every word to each other, and gradually the crowd will become angry and shout together to ask Atubo to come out?

If you were a passerby and saw such noise, would you stop and take a look at the excitement?

When your readers see such a scene, will they want to stand with you, take out a handful of melon seeds, and watch the excitement together?"

"Look, this should be the most interesting part of the whole story, but you didn't write it at all!

Because Atub's experience was something you heard from hearsay, not something you saw with your own eyes, so you don't realize which part is interesting at all."

Hit the nail on the head!

Song Huanxi was as enlightened as if he had lifted up the clouds to see the sun!

Indeed, whether it was Brother A Sheng or Uncle A Shui, she only heard about it through hearsay. She neither saw it with her own eyes nor took part in it!

Song Huanxi's spirit was lifted, and she felt that this gentleman who was neither drunk nor happy was a god in knowing things. He was really a god!

Song Huanxi read on attentively:

"Solving this problem is both simple and difficult. What you lack is experience, and experience takes time to accumulate.

You need to pay more attention to the things around you and always put yourself in the role of a passerby. Is this scene gossip enough? Is it worth stopping and watching?

If the answer is yes, then write down this scene and include it in your article later!"

"First settle in for a while. When one day, you see a person and are touched by his experience, and you will naturally want to use your pen to write a story with him as the protagonist, then you can start preparing to write!

When this idea is like a volcano erupting in your heart and cannot be suppressed no matter what, you can start writing."

The vertical version of the letter was really easy to read. Song Huanxi didn't even have to nod her head any more. She read the first half of Mr. No Drinking's letter over and over again, and felt that every sentence was full of good words.

In her heart, he is already a good teacher!

If you don't read the second half of the letter, Yiyou can do it too.

Song Huanxi sighed and looked at the second half of the letter:

"I am currently staying at a friend's house, as you know.

A few days ago, two friends and I went to a dance hall for a party and met a Miss Zheng by chance. Miss Zheng was kind-hearted and invited me to live with her.

Should I accept her invitation?"

Song Huanxi sighed again. The last letter was from a tavern where he met a Miss Xu. However, although Miss Xu was beautiful, her heart was not kind enough and she did not invite him to live with her.

If she remembered correctly, Wu Jiu Bu Huan mentioned in his first reply to her that he was going to take the pen name Gu Long just because his girlfriend's name was Gu Feng.

It seems that this Miss Gu Feng is already an ex-girlfriend.

Song Huanxi secretly guessed that this gentleman who was neither drunk nor happy must be a talented person and rich in wealth, otherwise how could he meet so many beauties by chance!

Beauties are not stupid!

It's just that she doesn't have any experience in love, so how can she teach him?

After thinking for a moment, Song Huanxi directly replaced her stepmother An Xiuniang and replied:

"Hello, Mr. No Drinking, No Joy!

I have read your letter and it is very enlightening. What you said is very true.

What I wrote was all based on hearsay. Without real experience, I don’t know what’s really exciting about it. I decided to follow your teacher’s advice and settle in for a while!

When you have something in mind, you can start writing again, and when the time comes, please ask your teacher for your advice!"

"Also, I will only mention one thing about Miss Zheng that you mentioned.

What you see now is her beauty with makeup on. If we live together, are you ready to see her look unkempt when she wakes up in the morning, yawning and going to the toilet?

Yes, she was probably wearing boxer shorts and a white tank top."

Song Huanxi is not exaggerating at all. An Xiuniang is like this. I wonder if Old He is used to her second marriage to the He family!

Anyway, she was frightened one morning and thought a homeless man from somewhere broke into her home.

At that time, her father was still there, and An Xiuniang had no idea how ugly she looked, and even glanced at her sideways: "How can a child know about the affairs between husband and wife?"

After Song Huanxi said this, he stuffed a self-addressed envelope into it as usual.

…

It was the next day when I received her reply without drinking.

After several letters and replies, Miss Yixiao has become the common concern of the three prodigal sons.

As soon as Xiong Yaoying opened the letter, Yu Xilou and Lin Ziqi came over from left to right——

After reading two sentences, Yu Xilou looked strange: "Did she really believe your nonsense?!"

Why observe more and think more? When Brother Yaoying writes martial arts novels, who should go and observe!

Xiong Yaoying glared at him: "What nonsense! I have already entered the house, she just got a glimpse of the door, I guided her, naturally she has a high position!"

"Besides, I asked her to accumulate life experience. Where did I go wrong! Just wait, I will write the way you were so excited in the ballroom yesterday into a novel!"

Yu Xilou: "..."

You really shouldn’t be arrogant!

I have forgotten that this guy is a novelist!

A shadow:......

So don’t speak ill of your brother!

Ps, An Xiu Niang is wearing the clothes of the heroine’s father.
Chapter completed!