tangerine,

Your writing is very good,

But don’t you think it’s a bit of a Mary Sue?

The heroine is powerful and scary.

When I say Mary Sue, I’m not actually a Mary Sue either.

The heroine is just because of her family problems,

You have to learn etiquette and so on,

Ask for omnipotence,

There is also a physical deficiency - anorexia.

Regarding Qian Suhen, I like this character better,

He deeply loves the heroine,

Love so much that I can’t help myself,

I hope he has a good ending,

For Yukimura,

I don’t want him to be Tetsu Asari,

He has a special love for his sister,

Do you have some ll feelings?

I hope the heroine in your novel can be like Naiya in Bai Yimo's novel,

There are more weaknesses,

This can hide Mary Sue's feelings,

It’s okay to abuse, but don’t overdo it…
Chapter completed!