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001 Description of others

I was so busy today that I forgot to update.

The investment that lasted for three years cannot be let go.

Let’s put another one on top of the updated (updated chapter) outline. I’ll make up for the text (free of charge) on weekends. Sorry.

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Structure: suspense - exploration - clues - deepening suspense (together with the next section to form a complete structure)

Goal-Plot: 1. Establish a new goal to pursue (Tarot/The Fool) 2. Develop the secrets of the world view 3. Establish several more distinctive character images 4. The performance of the magic master and the digestion of magic potions

Goal-Technique: 1. Reduce psychological descriptions when narrating 2. Make daily life without intense conflicts interesting (acting as a magician)

Detailed outline:

Part 1: Transition & Reasoning and Getting Started Next Step (Inception) - Normal version of the breakdown

When Igna left the Nighthawks team, he felt a little strange and couldn't figure out why he was let go. He also felt that Sesima seemed to be a very powerful person and was very different from the others. However, due to lack of information, Igna

Na felt that it was better not to worry about so much and just come out. Now that we have freedom, we have to start making arrangements to go home. (Describing the scene on the road, I almost got hit by a carriage while walking, and I mentioned the horse by the way.

Urine, steel and smoke, black mud floors, etc. (Whether Backlund should be mentioned depends on the situation))

Igna was thinking as he walked, and what he saw when he looked up was the gate of the circus. Igna did not expect that he would walk back like this. Igna subconsciously wanted to leave because he was not sure whether he wanted to stay here.

.But Igna ran into the leader of the circus, who took him back to the circus and greeted him warmly. He also met a few cute little sisters (the sisters of the apprentices who later joined the trapeze). The little sisters

Everyone expressed that they were worried about his situation, and Igna also felt a little warm-hearted, thinking that someone still cared about him. Then Igna felt that he didn't know where to go anyway, so he just stayed. Then he carried out the process at night.

A performance.

(additional drama)

Igna considered his status as an Extraordinary. He still didn't know how this person found out about his identity as an apprentice. He was about to look for it. But after thinking about it, he could only start with the person who brought him into the gathering of the Extraordinary Circle.

. He didn’t dare to go to that party for the time being. Then he had to contact that person from other places.

In addition, the Nighthawk said that no one poses a threat to you for the time being. You can move freely. Igna felt a little strange, what is temporary. And the Nighthawk did not say why the Asgar wanted to kill him in the first place.

Igna felt that he still needed to find out more and proceed with caution. So this time he wrote a letter and sent a telegram at the same time. It was written in two ciphers with different decoding methods. The letters were staggered in time.

Send it away first, then send a telegram (tune the tiger away from the mountain).

From the perspective of the Nighthawk, Ignar's current situation was reported, and then the surveillance was no longer carried out. Then it was directly cut to Ignar's daily life.

(Additional scene completed)

(The following content feels too protracted, and the entire process becomes a memory. Omit the content that should be omitted. If it is just to add feelings, it is not needed. Quickly enter the main purpose and state "Russell and Tarot"

.But the process should be written in an interesting way.)

Then during the waiting period, Igna started to do other things, such as research on "Creation Myth". Since Igna only needs to go out to perform at a fixed time, he can do it by himself at other times.

You can also discuss it with the group leader. He wanted to find some books to read, but was persuaded to leave at the door of the library (because of the clothes, scene description: all the people who came here were famous people riding carriages
Chapter completed!
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