I will sharpen my sword for ten years

Updates have been slow recently, but my writing workload has not eased at all. The first seventeen chapters have been completely rewritten.

I modified Ai Ting's character to make her closer to the Green Mango Goddess. Her character became gentler, more rational, and more kind to others, and I removed some behaviors that could easily lead to bad emotions in readers.

The poisonous points caused by Ai Ting's unpleasant personality in the early days should be gone.

Later, the content of Scarab Bank rescuing Xiao Han was also criticized a lot. Some people read it and felt that it was quite a virgin.

I personally think it’s because Xiao Han’s personality was not distinct enough in the early stages. So later on I am planning to strengthen Xiao Han’s early shaping.

The first and most poisonous point may be the appearance of Zhang Li. I think the existence of such a hateful character is meaningful. The problem is that the plot of the wealthy princess Ai Ting reminds people of many bloody routines, and then encounters a huge

despise.

In addition, Meng Fei’s early experiences in Zhangdao also gave people a lot of sad feelings.

I haven't figured out how to adjust this part yet. If you have any suggestions, you can tell me.

I think the storyline after Zhangdao is okay, especially after Suzaku appears. Mainly because I write more and feel that my control of the plot has become more mature.

If there is anything you think is wrong, you can leave a message and tell me. I decided to build this book well.

Use the attitude of sharpening your sword for ten years.
Chapter completed!