Comments from readers on Attack on Little Monsters:
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(He) The expression murmured "the ground" (existing, excessive)
Both eyes are sorrowful and sad. "Looking into the distance.
Although it is just three days of getting along (sick sentence)
She has never left the same (it has always been adverbial, leaving is an instant verb, and she can not leave if she has never left)
Thinking of this, Lin Yu showed a silly smile again (here is a end to use)
When Lin Yu was drinking at all (since you were all happy, don’t be in it)
At that time, I am afraid that some "careless people" on the court and rivers and lakes (this is a meaningful title, please do not let good people do bad things.)
The Beijing officials, the princes and the forces on the rivers and lakes to get married. (The great triangle relationship relationship)
There are two teenagers on the ancient road.
Lin Wei looked around, and said respectfully: "Son, at this time it is dusk, the bird does not return to the forest, there may be ambush in front of the bird.
"Whether you wait for the son to finish speaking and go)
The murderousness on the face of the cold "night" is vaguely visible (one face is murderous, I believe this usage is very common, but the "faintly visible" thing refers to the existence but it is difficult to see.
The expression was darkened (the expression could not be dark, it could only be dark, and dark and dark are not completely common)
The pupils are enlarged in an instant (the author, please observe the life in detail. The pupils are large in astigmatism. The narrowing is the spotlight. When staring at a certain thing, the pupils should be reduced, and the pupils are gradually enlarged after swallowing.
Slightly rewritten the end of the first chapter, and the author looks at it.
When the cold night came back to God, there was a line of blood on the corner of his mouth. He stared at Lin Yu's eyes and was still as sharp as a knife, cold as iron, but quickly and dull like a candle in the wind;
There is an extra sharp blade.
Chapter completed!