Chapter 016 The same issue
The characters are the face of the article, and it is often said that the characters are like the person and the characters are good-looking. The article can first add an impression point. Zhang Tan's good handwriting quickly evokes Wang Conglun's spirit.
At the top of the first page of the letter paper, a large letter was written in a fountain pen.
"The four famous people are catching Kanto."
"The four famous arresters? Are you writing about the arresters? This is interesting." Wang Conglun followed the title and looked down.
"He once crushed the 76 cavalry of evil wind and sand in the endless desert; in the coldest Heilongjiang River, he captured the murderous Dragon King Xue You."
"He once ambushed a day and a night in a place that was so hot that he could roast eggs; he also traveled thousands of miles in the terrible valley of Kamanla Galevia."
"He has been an official who will be appointed when he meets the governor of seven provinces, and has also been a pig-killer in the market when he was an undercover agent."
"He has killed people and saved people."
"Now I am willing to do things under the disciples of the person he admires the most..."
"Well." Wang Conglun's original contempt was gradually replaced by surprise. "This start is very imposing, with a bit of the meaning of 'the pink face is not revealed, and the red lips are not laughing before they start to laugh'. It is the first to win the voice, the first to win the voice!"
Thinking about it, keep watching.
The description in the article continues: "He was twenty years old and he looked not ugly at all; his sword had killed the people he wanted to kill, and for more than ten years, only one person could escape his pursuit and pursuit. He was never excited, and when the enemy was excited or afraid, it was when he caught someone and killed someone. This was his usual style, just like a wolf chasing a deer."
"But when he took the killing order against these people who did all evil and unforgivable sins, he pursued the enemy and his men desperately. Whether for public or private purposes, he knew that he might not be the opponent."
"He, one person, the other party, thirteen people, and a wolf. Before he learned to draw his sword, the other party had been a wolf for more than twenty years. This person was the only person he could not pursue, and almost died under the other party's hands."
"He escaped by chance. Today, three years later, he has to chase and kill again."
"He is cold, withdrawn, and persevering."
"He uses his sword to be mysterious, spicy, and fast."
"His hands are extremely firm; his body is a speeding arrow..."
"Wow!" Wang Conglun exclaimed uncontrollably. The contempt in his eyes had long dissipated, leaving only surprise and surprise. "Is this a martial arts that a first-year high school student can write? It's so amazing. I have also reviewed many martial arts works. It's so amazing at the beginning, and the characters are so focused. It's rare, rare!"
"In just a short story, I explained the origin of this person, the origin of the incident, the character's personality, and the martial arts methods. The words are vivid and there is no awkward feeling at all. I can't believe that this is from the first year of high school students. Those famous martial arts masters in Hong Kong and Taiwan are probably at this level."
Wang Conglun was so happy that he only looked at one beginning, and he had a strong sense that he had discovered a piece of gold, a piece of gold that was full of gold.
And the more you look down, the more Wang Conglun could feel that this first-year high school student with real name Zhang Tan and pen name Tan Zhang, his writing skills are definitely not inferior to those of Yang Que, Xiao Zhen, and Ye Run, who were unanimously affirmed by them. On the contrary, compared to the slightly mysterious beginning, the subsequent texts are more simple.
"This is not like the level that ordinary teenagers can write, it's talent!"
Wang Conglun quickly read the identity of the protagonist, the four famous arresters, the iron hand, the ruthless, the cold-blooded, the cold-blooded in the pursuit of life: "The names of the four famous arresters are very domineering. This seems to be a complete story structure, and the protagonist I am writing now is just one of this complete story, interesting and interesting!"
The clean and neat murder, the simple description, the perfect details, and the grand layout, Wang Conglun likes the more he looks.
I haven't read such a high-quality martial arts novel for a long time.
When the thirteen murderers were killed by cold blood, Wang Conglun felt a sense of pleasure from his feet to his head, and it was almost like a broken sky spirit squirting out. This extremely cold and calm way of killing was really too unconsciously immersed in it.
Then, Lengxue fell into the siege of four people.
Wang Conglun's mind fell from Wanliyunkong to the ground in an instant, for fear that Lengxue could not escape the deadly counterattack. As mentioned in the previous article, Lengxue knew that he might not be able to defeat the other party.
"You must hold on!" Wang Conglun exclaimed in his heart, and then turned the page.
Then, stared at his hands.
He has finished reading the ten pages of the letter paper.
It's gone.
There is nothing exciting.
"Ah!" Wang Conglun really wanted to swear. Such a wonderful place, such a critical place, such a dangerous place, there was no further information. Isn't this awesome thing?
...
"How is this manuscript good?" The editor-in-chief of the story moderator comfortably appreciated Wang Conglun's expression from contempt to amazement. When he saw this manuscript, he also had such changes.
Wang Conglun was swaying with a thin ten-page paper, and he was still impressed with an unsatisfactory appreciation: "It's not just good, the writing is excellent, the writing is excellent, and the story is excellent. It is definitely the first-class quality work among the manuscripts we received in the "Martial Arts Edition" these days."
"Stop, please note that this article was submitted to our "Story Edition". I have decided to publish this article "Four Famous Shocking Guandong". It is very good to have a new martial arts work with a good flavor, improve the layout of "Story Edition", and adjust the readers' tastes." Zhang Yiyuan reached out and made a pause action.
"Lao Zhang, you have to be kind. Our "Martial Arts Edition" is preparing for a trial issue. This determines whether our "Martial Arts Edition" can be successfully launched. Therefore, we urgently need high-quality works to support the storefront. Lao Zhang, you have always valued love and friendship. You will not help this, don't worry, it's useless to help. Next issue, we will give you a good manuscript!"
Seeing Wang Conglun "humble", Zhang Yiyuan touched his chin with pride: "Oh, I am not the kind of person who is unkind, it is not impossible to give it to you."
"Then I'll thank you Lao Zhang, I'll treat you to dinner another day!"
"Don't worry, I haven't finished speaking yet, I have an idea."
"What's the idea?" Wang Conglun became nervous again, afraid that Zhang Yiyuan would regret it, so he would not hand over "The Four Famous Conquering Guandong" to him.
In just ten pages, two chapters of text are nothing. The key is that the novel with more than ten thousand words is obviously just the beginning of a work. There is still a lot of content in the future. If you can't get the first two chapters, you will not be able to publish them in the future, and the loss will be huge.
"What happened to Zhang Tan? Didn't he see that we posted so many advertisements in "Martial Arts Edition"? It actually submitted to "Story Edition", which made me too passive." Wang Conglun complained to Zhang Tan in his heart, but thinking that Zhang Tan was just a first-year high school student, he felt relieved again. It must be that the other party was young and was not very clear about submissions.
I'm afraid I've only read "Legend of the Ancient and Modern·Story Edition", and I've submitted the manuscript according to the above submission address. I don't know that "Legend of the Ancient and Modern·Marriage Edition" is being launched.
Zhang Yiyuan didn't know that Wang Conglun had turned a lot of thoughts and said to himself: "I think so. The next issue of your "Martial Arts Edition" is a trial issue, right? After the trial issue, it will be the first issue. These two issues will definitely not be available, and the number of readers is still accumulated. It is better to let "Story Edition" bring you some readers."
"Oh, how do you bring it?" Wang Conglun relaxed after hearing Zhang Yiyuan's words.
"We publish both magazines together, and our story version will be published at the beginning, but we will not publish the follow-ups. We will inform readers that you can subscribe to the "Martial Arts Edition" to watch the follow-ups. Those who like to watch martial arts will definitely subscribe to your "Martial Arts Edition". Those who don't like to read will not publish it anymore and will not have any comments on us, right?"
Chapter completed!