Zhu Ting nodded a little bit, biting his lips and said: "You see." After turning, he returned to the small office.

Du Fei felt interesting, took a sip of hot tea, opened the manuscript of Miss Zhu Ting ...

At this time, Zhu Ting looked out from time to time in the small office and looked out from time to time. He found that Du Fei was looking at her manuscript. He had no prejudice in the heart.

Sitting opposite the head of Qian, still holding his "Xianji Arsenal", the glasses were put under the bridge of the nose, and when he saw Zhu Ting looked like, he said, "Girl, are you recruiting Du Fei?"

Zhu Ting stunned and glared at the Chief of Qianke: "What is it to recruit him! The old comrade speaking and paying attention to the wording."

Qian Ke laughed: "Girl, do you say, do you see us?"

Zhu Ting made a big red face: "Comrade Lao Qian, what are you talking nonsense!"

Chief Qian's lips, deliberately: "No best! I told you, girl, little white face like Xiao Du, there is no kind eye ..."

"Comrade Lao Qian! You can be angry again." Zhu Ting tried to stretch her face as much as possible, but the redness of her cheeks exposed her obvious insufficient confidence.

"Well ~" Qian Ke sighed, and learned the tone of Peking Opera's white thought: "Oh ~ loyalty to ears ~ Yeah!"

Zhu Ting glanced at him again.

Outside, Du Fei looked at a few pages at a glance.

It's time to say, Zhu Ting's pen -steel writing is really beautiful! The font structure has just entered, the pen is sharp, and the charm is full.

In comparison, Du Fei's word is much worse.

By the time the lunch break, Du Fei had read more than half of the novel written by Zhu Ting.

As someone got up and walked out, he also raised his head and stretched a lazy waist.

Zhu Ting came out of the office and came up: "Hey ~ What do you think?"

Du Fei nodded and said, "Sister Zhu, your hard writing calligraphy is really good!"

"Who asked you ..." Zhu Ting stunned and immediately reacted. A pair of beautiful Dan Feng's eyes stared at the boss and said angrily: "You speak to me, don't yin and yang strange, the novel I wrote is so bad?

"

Du Fei comforted: "In fact, it's not so bad, at least the punctuation symbols are right."

Zhu Ting fried suddenly, and the two fists pinched tightly, and they couldn't wait to go up to hammer Du Fei.

However, in the unit, she still has to maintain the leadership image, but she still grits her teeth: "Du Fei, you better explain to me! How is my novel? Otherwise ..."

Du Fei instantly felt a murderous murderous, but he was very irony, and he said, "This is what you call me, don't cry later."

Zhu Ting took a deep breath and pressed the impulse of Du Fei, "you said!"

As a young literary and art woman who graduated from Yanda, the bastard in front of him questioned his literary dream!

Is it tolerated or not!

Du Fei simply did not rush to eat, so good about it: "First of all, the male protagonist, what is the name of this unlucky name? Zhan Taiming, don't just call Zhan Tai Di Ming?

What are the use of obstacles to reading? I still explained to others many times in the book. My surname is Zhan Tesai, no surname Zhan, is it embarrassing? "

Zhu Ting's flat mouth.

Du Fei said again: "There is still that murderer, why do you make such a low -level mistake when you open the board? It is not like an experienced enemy spy. Can the protagonist defeat this enemy, can the protagonist show great?"

Zhu Ting was a bit nothing to say.

Du Fei continued: "Think of Professor Moriadi in Holmesrri! Powerful, sinister, cunning, fierce! That is the temperament that the villain is big."

At this time, Zhu Ting's little fist couldn't hold it. She asked without any confidence: "Is it really so bad?"

When Du Fei saw her poor look, she couldn't bear it.

Zhu Ting blinked before he reacted: "You ... you are angry with me!" He said that he reached out and went to grab the book on Du Fei's table.

Du Fei quickly held it down and laughed: "Hey ~ hey ~ Sister Zhu is angry, you are angry!"

But inadvertently, the elbow hit a certain thing, soft ~

Zhu Ting took a step back, flushed his face instantly, and he couldn't care about grabbing his book, pouted his mouth, stomped his feet, turned around and ran away.

Du Fei reached out and touched his elbow, and said secretly: "I am really unpredictable!"

After thinking about it, pick up the paperbook on the table and follow it.

Du Fei took a few steps in the courtyard, caught up with Zhu Ting, and laughed: "Sister, it's really angry."

Zhu Ting's cheek was still red, glared at him, saw the paper, stopped and stretched out, "Give me back!"

Du Feidao: "Don't go! I haven't finished reading it yet!"

Zhu Ting "hum" said: "What else is watching, it's worthless by your degradation."

Du Feidao: "Why is it worthless? The scene description is really good! From far to near, from near to far, they are very pictured, and their words are quite gorgeous.

Zhu Ting collapsed his eyelids, his expression of "You Lie".

Du Fei laughed: "Don't stand here, let's go and talk while walking."

After speaking, Zhu Ting promised not to agree, and walked forward before taking care of himself.

Zhu Ting stood up for a second, but still followed.

Du Fei waited for her to come to the side, and she didn't tease her, and said seriously: "Sister Zhu, is this the first time you wrote a novel?"

Zhu Ting "um".

"Actually, as a beginner, these problems in your novel are nothing." Du Fei said: "You can pass Yan Da, the composition must be very good, and the prose of poetry should be well written.

The same, the essence of the novel is to tell stories. As long as you understand the story, it is wonderful.

Zhu Ting pouted and asked, "Then you said, how can you tell the story well?"

Du Feiyan Jane: "If you want to win, you must be ups and downs."

"The ups and downs?" Zhu Ting frowned.

Du Fei paused, waiting for her to think about it.

Zhu Ting thought about it, "Do you mean that the plot should be twists?"

Du Fei nodded: "Just like" Jin Ping Mei ", Ximen Qing married Li Ping'er ..."

"Oh ~" When Zhu Ting was ascending, his cheeks were red again, and he raised his hand to beat Du Fei's arm fiercely: "Don't learn well! What do you want to break?"

Du Fei's lips, saying that you have never seen it, that is it a broken book?

However, I also realized that I was somewhat Meng Lang, and I changed my mouth: "Then say" Journey to the West "three dozen bone essence, which is a typical ups and downs."

Zhu Ting is thinking.

Du Fei said: "Go back and take a good look at the three dozen bone essence, change the plot of your novel, and see if it is much better."
Chapter completed!