Chapter 140 Nothing
【Happy Family】
Xu Manning: "(cry) work overtime."
Wu Wenyue: "Eat outside, communicate with each other, @Li Peifeng, are you here?"
Li Peifeng: "If you don't go, write, don't drink, wait for you to come home."
Wu Wenyue: "Okay, I'll bring you vegetables when I go back."
After seeing off his parents, Li Peifeng returned to the apartment, writing intently, and responded briefly to the mobile phone message. Even Wu Wenyue did not agree to the invitation for the dinner, but took a casual sip of the bread that Xu Manning bought, sat in front of the computer and continued to write a book.
He has saved 50,000 words of the manuscript of the book "Female Master", which has been updated steadily for four or five thousand words a day, and has another 10,000 words a day, maintaining a good trend of the manuscript growth.
Li Peifeng plans to write another 200,000 words to complete the book and write a new book wholeheartedly.
In fact, most of his current thoughts are also on the new book, otherwise the female master would not have written only 10,000 words a day, at least doubled. However, the progress of the new book is still slow, and it can even be said to be zero.
Since the project was launched, Li Peifeng wrote several outlines, but they were all pushed down and communicated with Zhao Qingge. His thoughts were changed and he did not know how to write them in the end. He did not know what style of writing should be used to tell a story.
Now he only has one folder, which contains a document of 300,000 words, several pictures and several tables, including the world map of Narnia, history and humanities and other details.
...
"I'm a waste."
Li Peifeng sat in front of the keyboard and stared at the computer screen blankly. From 5 pm to 7:30 pm, he posted two and a half hours of time, but in the end he didn't code a word, so he came to this conclusion.
"I'm such a waste!"
Li Peifeng shook his head and sighed. He could use one sentence to describe his current psychological state, and he was full of thoughts, but each idea had reasons to not be written. He had too many concerns and had no way to start writing.
At the beginning, he just wanted to write casually, simply write in a cool way, and use relaxed techniques to copy the things in his dreams.
The male and female protagonists use themselves and Zhao Qingge as the prototype. The two of them went into another world to take risks. At that time, they added two elf beauties and demon beauties to play the harem to fill the regret of not being able to hug each other in their dreams...
But not long after, Li Peifeng felt that it was a pity to write like this. He had ruined such a colorful and real world. I was sorry for his time travel experience. In addition to his ambitions, he changed his mind.
Li Peifeng wanted to write it as a serious fantasy novel, and wanted to make this work jump out of the online circle, use this book to form a bridge between popular and serious literature, weaken the creation of refreshing points, pay attention to the magnificent and majestic background of the novel world, portray the exquisite plot layout and complex human nature, and the whole story is targeted by "The Three-Body Problem".
For this reason, Li Peifeng even drank perfume alone, traveled through his dream again, deliberately remembering more details about the other world, that is, the system mentioned the "DQ01 Magic Plane".
As far as world history is concerned, the entire plane of the forty-five countries has different national systems, political ecology, monetary system, power distribution, social structure, geographical environment, power and language system, folk customs and habits in different regions, and even language accents... and so on. I remember it almost all in my second dream, and Li Peifeng finally started to type on the keyboard and write the world structure in the book.
But the more he writes, the less he feels.
"Maybe it will be lost!"
"It may be awful to lose!!"
"I will definitely be very miserable. If you really want to write, it is recommended to change your vest and write it. When you switch to men and play retro again. I think you have just had two days of full meal and started to be willful."
The above is what Li Peifeng said after informing editor Xia Sheng about his idea of his new book.
Cold and ruthless, but it is really kind-hearted. In fact, as the author of the online article and the person who studies online articles, Li Peifeng also understands the truth very well.
The commercial system of online literature serialization determines that the more detailed a novel is written, the better it is, the more profitable it is.
For example, such as "The Three-Body Body", "The Song of Ice and Fire", "The Lord of the Rings", "The Hobbit", "Harry Potter", and even "The Return of the Condor Heroes", "The Legend of the Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty", etc., these adapted movies and TV series and extremely best-selling books, now serialized on the end site, can they really achieve good results?
Ninety-nine percent is not possible.
More than ten years ago, the final was launched a project. He invited 30 traditional writers at the level of the State Writers Association and vice-chairmen to post their works on the website to serialize. He also invited Huang Yi, Han Han, Xiao Guo and others to post books at the final, and the station provided considerable publicity for these well-known writers.
As a result, all failed.
Without exception, all failed.
After that, industry insiders finally realized the fact that online literature is not only not equal to serious literature, but also popular literature, and it is not the same as literature in the traditional publishing industry era.
Online novels are fragmented readings. The nature of online novels is more like "storytelling" than traditional novels. There is a paragraph every day, each paragraph has buttons, with characters and plots first.
Only in this way, people have listened to one paragraph today and want to listen to the next paragraph tomorrow. There are buttons in the story, which makes you feel itchy.
As for the world view?
What is a worldview?
Online readers are looking at simple and bright stories that can relax their moods, not to carefully think about the inner changes of the characters in the book and understand how powerful the world structure is in the book.
Let’s listen to those popular storytellings, "Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio", "Sui and Tang Dynasties", "Three Heroes and Five Righteousness", which storyteller tells you how the world inside is so refined?
I have to tell you one or two words, and I don’t even have to tell them. These stories are based on historical structures. The audience understands them clearly and just have a big difference.
"Ba~"
The gentleman slapped the wood on the high platform: "The Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors of Morality, Fame and fortune, Shang and Zhou dynasties..."
After finishing the poem, the gentleman said, "Today, let's tell a story about the Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf. I can't remember the specific dynasty. I probably remember that there was such a family during the Northern Song Dynasty..."
The background of this story is finished.
In just a few simple sentences, it’s time to talk about the protagonist. If you don’t tell the protagonist’s story, you’ll talk about it. The audience will not give you any rewards.
Similarly, if online novels pay too much attention to the portrayal of the world view, the author is asking for trouble.
There is nothing we can do about it. Nowadays, online articles are becoming more and more like Douyin’s divine songs. You only need to listen to the chorus. As for the whole song, there is no need at all, and it’s all over.
But Li Peifeng had ambitions and wanted to get this book out of the online literature circle, he had to ask for trouble.
He had to spend his time to portray the details of the DQ01 magic plane, bring out the complete framework of the dream world, take out the characters and stories, so that readers can see the vivid impression of every creature in that world from the text, and let readers feel the real hustle and bustle of the absurd world with a long history, magic and technology coexist.
Moreover, if Li Peifeng does not explain things from another world clearly, readers will not be able to understand it.
Just talking about the power system, science and magic, the physical rules are different from the plane where Li Peifeng is located. Most of the extraordinary powers are mages, warriors, and rangers, but what is required to advance to extraordinary is not to fight monsters and upgrade, but to practice yourself hard.
For how to practice, you can refer to the method of qigong practice. In short, it is mysterious and mysterious.
In addition, the ranger may not be holding a bow and arrow, it may be an AWR-76 sniper rifle. And maybe he can take out the battle axe with his left hand in his void and hold the staff with his right hand. With a command, he can even let the dog bite you!
That's right, the power system of DQ01 is so chaotic, chaotic to the point of being real. Abbas, a perfume-making perfume, can do magic, and nothing is impossible.
Let’s look at the world races. DQ01 includes many fantasy works such as humans, elves, orcs, and dragons. Their racial appearance and habits are similar to those imagined. But there are also fantasy works such as sea, demons, dwarves, and Nord, or even if they appear, they are completely different from what people imagine.
In the DQ01 plane, although the dwarf is short, he has a gentle temper and meticulous mind. He has no strong beard on his face. He is gentle and gentle. He is the image of a scholar and has frequent scientists.
The Nords are plant life bodies with human form, tall and have no eyes, and use the surrounding plants and mind power to perceive the world, immortal species, arrogant, and like to explore. Most of the professions of this race are farmers or explorers.
By the way, each race has its own power system branch...
"It's so difficult, there are too many things. According to Lao Zhao and his own ideas, it is written in accordance with traditional Western fantasy novels, which is to use PV multi-line narrative, deep background, detailed environment, all-encompassing, national hatreds and family hatreds in the whole world, love and killing among various races, various power struggles, and grand narrative arrangements. It's difficult to write this and read it, but the story is profound, easy to promote, and a strong sense of epic. The disadvantage is that the market acceptance rate is probably going to decline."
"If you consider commerciality and make rhythm and routines, you will be destined to give up this part, and the balance between the two is really hard to grasp!"
Li Peifeng sighed again, and looked at the time. It was already 8:30 pm and there was still no word on the screen.
So he decided to write something, saying that he had not wasted his time...
"Everything is difficult at the beginning."
“It’s hard in the middle.”
“It’s hard in the end!”
"Writing a book? What kind of book can I write? You know if I don't have the ability?!"
"Sign platinum? What's wrong with signing platinum? I can't write it even more after signing platinum. I spend millions of papers in my bank account! How can I have the motivation to write a book? I'm nothing, I'm the only time!"
Yes, it's great.
Li Peifeng made a fuss and checked out of the codec software with satisfaction, logged into TT, thinking about asking book friends to recommend a few movies to see and find inspiration.
"Ahem~"
There was quite a lot of news, so Li Peifeng clicked it directly. In addition to group chats, there was also a dialog box of "Yun Xinyuexing". The other party's message was sent ten minutes ago.
Yun Xinyuexing: "How is the new book written?"
Is it better to say 'or the same'?
If I say "no stroke has not been moved", I will seem a little lazy, and I am thinking hard, too.
Li Peifeng felt a little guilty and typed on the keyboard to reply. After typing two words, he suddenly felt something was wrong...
Zhao Qingge and Tutor Zhao knew that it was normal for me to write a new book. Your Yun Xinyuexing is my wife on the Internet. How did you know that I was writing a new book too? I have never told you.
"You're showing off your own faults and haven't reacted yet, right?"
After thinking for a while, Li Peifeng decided not to answer the message. If the chat started, the two of them knew who was who they were. He was not sure if Zhao Qingge could still fall in love with him online under a mask.
But since it has been online and people have sent another message, it is not good not to speak...
Chapter completed!