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Chapter 218 Simple Composition

Tu Xian stayed at Xibao Middle School as long as possible, but in May, he could no longer take a vacation and had to go back in a bad mood.

He was unhappy because he felt that he had wasted the opportunity. In a month at Xibao Middle School, Tu Xian completed a half-paper and also took advantage of the second author in Yang Rui's new paper.

Now that he has left, most of the second authors will learn from Yao Yue and Wei Zhen.

Tu Xian is quite envious of this. It is no wonder that it is all foreign journals. Even if you have the title of a second author, it is useful when evaluating professional titles. Maybe it is of great use.

But he had been away from the school for a long time, and only a state unit like the school allowed him to take a month's sick leave without having to take out the sick leave bill immediately, but it would not work any longer.

After Tu Xian went back, he would find a familiar doctor to prescribe a rehabilitation instructions and reimburse the car fee.

He had a paper published, which was enough to cope with the school.

Tu Xian left Xibao Middle School, which did not affect Yang Rui's work, because Yang Rui had already moved the work center to the college entrance examination.

There are two months left, and the actual review time is only more than a month. Not to mention Yang Rui himself, the students in Ruixue Group have reached the final sprint stage.

Of course, sprinting does not use all your strength.

On the contrary, sprinting is more about efficiency and requires limited time to complete unlimited work. If you are tired, it will not be good news for the exam.

Yang Rui handed over the experiment he was doing to Wei Zhenxue, and still asked Yao Yue and Lu Zhi to be experimental assistants. He returned to the classroom and taught an English composition class to the students in Hongrui class.

Not only Hongrui class, but also students from other classes also brought benches to listen to Yang Rui's lectures.

Starting this year, the English score in the college entrance examination has increased from 50 points to 100 points. This is a huge increase and a huge crisis.

For students in township middle schools, it is almost the same to describe it as bad news.

Not to mention anything else, just like Xibao Middle School before, there was no serious English teacher.

Even in Xi County, there are no professional English teachers.

In such an environment, students who can learn mute English are already among the most popular people.

The composition questions are naturally the most difficult part of the English test paper. The English teacher Yang Rui invited couldn't explain well, so Yang Rui went to the battle himself.

Standing in the center of the podium, Yang Rui asked calmly with his expression: "What kind of English composition do you think is the best?"

"The words are beautiful and the language is smooth." Xu Jing answered with the description in the textbook.

Wang Guohua said carelessly: "The grammar is good."

"It's meaningful." Li Xuegong looked up slightly.

Yang Rui smiled and said, "Good English articles are like this, good English papers are not."

"Why?"

"Because you can't write it. Do you think, in the current situation in China, how many students can write beautiful, smooth, good grammar, and meaningful English compositions?"

The students shook their heads one after another.

Yang Rui knew that there were actually such students. Even in China in the 1980s, there were still many students who had received good English education, but the number was too small and could not be compared with the TOEFL students in later generations who had 10,000 English grade n and TOEFL students.

Yang Rui didn't need to talk about this issue in depth. On the podium, he used his familiar expressions and actions and said, "What kind of form should the English composition we are pursuing now? I think the simplest thing is enough. To make words clear and express the meaning clearly is the first level, and not making mistakes is the second level. Moreover, the first level must obey the second level. Do you understand what it means?"

“First of all, there is no mistake.”

"Yes, when you encounter the sentence you want and don't know how to answer it, use the simplest kind."

"This will make the score lower."

"If you make an error, you must deduct points. If you make an error, you will deduct one copy. How many mistakes can you deduct in your essay? The text is beautiful and the grammar is smooth, and there are not many points in total. Even if you don't give up on this part, you won't miss all the mistakes." Yang Rui's tone gradually became stern, and then said: "If you can't understand, then remember a slogan, simple is beauty, and say it all..."

“Simple is beauty…”

Yang Rui quickly ended the lecture and indoctrination, allowing the students to start practicing writing.

In fact, he had started to prepare English compositions a few months ago. At that time, his main measure was to recite.

Reciting new concept English is the first step, and reciting some special example sentences is the second step.

Through these methods, more than half of the students in Hongrui class can reach the English passing line, and most of the remaining students do not recite them carefully.

Even when facing the college entrance examination, continuous reciting is still boring. It is normal for some students to not persevere or choose other breakthrough points.

There are only seven subjects in the college entrance examination, and each subject can be reviewed perfectly is a minority after all.

However, in May, basic review is useless.

Yang Rui reads their compositions in class one by one, and then corrects them in class.

This time, regardless of whether the students' language is beautiful or not, he just finds out the error and marks it with a red pen, which will result in how many points they will lose.

Most students will be deducted more than 10 points, which means that they will have to make more than ten mistakes when writing an English essay worth hundreds of words.

This is better than Yang Rui imagined.

The students in other classes were also taken care of by teachers, but the native English teachers at Xibao Middle School were slower to correct compositions.

Yang Rui slowly walked to Liu Shan.

As a student, Liu Shan works very hard and has a very good talent.

However, she has some intention of pursuing better, and she has no less mistakes than other students.

Yang Rui had to specifically explain: "Any sentence written incorrectly will not be judged as a good sentence. The result of your doing so will only be a deduction, but it cannot be a bonus."

"But if it's all simple sentences, you'll get points deducted."

"It may be 3 points to lose two points, but you can lose 7 points less because of this, or you make a profit, right?"

"You teach us to memorize new concept English, can't you use it?"

"If you want to use it, I suggest you use the original sentence." Yang Rui did not say something bad in the basics, but directly said the method, saying: "Modifying the sentences in it will change your sense of language. Therefore, the correct way is that if you make sure that the sentence is correct, you can use it, otherwise, you won't."

"How many points can you get to do this?"

"It's about 10 points more than before." This is a significant improvement. For the college entrance examination, you will enter two completely different schools.

Liu Shan nodded slightly and continued to write an essay.

Yang Rui inspected two classes before he finished the composition for all the students. When he returned to his room, he spread out his homework book and started writing an English composition.

If you write too many academic papers, the sense of language in normal composition will change, and Yang Rui does not want to lose points for this.

Teacher Jing Yulan is still waiting for him in Beijing.
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