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Chapter 61: Craftsmanship is too heavy

Teacher Xiao Han did not show up for the morning reading class, which was absolutely abnormal, because this girl was serious about her work and never came to the class for an entire morning reading class.

It turns out that there is a reason for this. When Teacher Xiao Han was reviewing the essays, he found two good articles with the same title and completely different content. Both of them were more than 500 words. They could definitely stand out in the fifth grade.

Then she took these two essays and asked for advice from her senior teacher, Mr. Huang, the head teacher of Classes 3 and 5 and the winner of the advanced teacher award for several consecutive years.

Teacher Huang is in her early forties and teaches Chinese. She wears highly myopic glasses and is tall and thin. She is one of Huang Han's most respected teachers.

If the trajectory was still the same as before, Huang Han escaped from Fatty Jiang's clutches after being divided into classes in the fourth grade and became Teacher Huang's student.

Then Huang Han progressed from a lower-class student to a middle-class student. Teacher Huang followed the class and continued to teach Huang Han in the fifth grade.

At this time, Huang Han became enlightened, his grades improved rapidly and he became a top student. He became a top student for the first and only time in his life before graduating from elementary school.

At this time, Teacher Huang also saw a good composition and wanted to share it with others. She took the two composition books brought by Teacher Xiao Han and showed Shen Xiaorong's composition copy to Teacher Xiao Han.

Just a moment later, Teacher Huang became a little moved. She asked, "Is Huang Han the student who tells stories to his classmates every day, and this time he is only one point short of double hundred in the midterm exam?"

"Yes, this child should be both good at character and academics. He is willing to help others and enthusiastic about serving the class. I have seen these with my own eyes. I still don't understand why he is not even a Young Pioneer?"

"Is there such a thing? It is unreasonable that such a good child should be treated so unfairly! His essay is very well written and impeccable, but I always feel that there is something missing behind the gorgeousness.

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"Teacher Huang, you are so awesome. That's what I think. Take a look at Zhang Chunmei's essay again."

After a while, Teacher Huang smiled and said: "I understand that there is something missing in Huang Han's composition."

Teacher Xiao Han immediately said: "Simple!"

"Yes! It is simple. Although Zhang Chunmei's composition lacks gorgeous words, it reveals her true temperament and can be described as simple and unpretentious.

Although Huang Han’s compositions are well-crafted, they are too craftsmanship and are not natural at all.”

"Teacher Huang, which article do you think is better?"

"Naturally, Zhang Chunmei's essay came first when I rated it. Although Huang Han's composition skills are solid, they are slightly inferior. Alas! The gap between Shen Xiaorong's composition in our class this time is too big."

After saying such words, Teacher Huang, who truly loves his students, felt a little regretful.

Shen Xiaorong is her favorite student. Of course she expects this child to come out on top every time, but two children suddenly appear in the next class and crush her. How can Teacher Huang feel so embarrassed?

Teacher Huang said: "Teacher Han, can you lend me these two essays for one class? I plan to use them as model essays for awards, and also to encourage Classes 3 and 5 not to rest on their laurels, otherwise Classes 3 and 4 will catch up.

It even means transcendence.”

"Yeah! Yeah! You are still smart. No wonder the class you lead is always first in the grade. I don't know how much knowledge I have learned from you!"

"Teacher Han, don't belittle yourself, I feel terrible when I see you!"

At this time, of course Huang Han didn't know that a story would happen if he wrote a composition casually. He was writing the lyrics of "In That Distant Place" for Chengwen Pavilion.

Cheng Wenge watched from the side and asked Huang Han if there were words he didn't recognize or sentences he didn't quite understand.

Education through entertainment is of course more effective with less effort. Seeing that the Cultural Revolution was interested in lyrics, Huang Han was of course willing to give him a good explanation of the words.

After the morning reading class, Zhang Chunmei and others also got the lyrics of "Olive Tree".

After a while, the three girls sang "Don't ask me where I come from, my hometown is far away..."

It sounded so good that the whole class refused to make a sound and listened silently. The students from the next class came over to watch.

What's wrong with Classes 3 and 4, one after another? The students in Classes 3 and 6 have begun to complain that they don't have a good monitor.

The students in Classes 3 and 5 were okay. They unanimously asked the class monitor to bring a few students who are good singers to Class 3 and 4 to learn the song and give them the lyrics for everyone to copy.

Shen Xiaorong heard Huang Han sing this song, and based on her understanding of music, she thought it was much better than Zhang Chunmei's.

She came to Huang Han generously and said: "Huang Han, can you give me a copy of the lyrics of "Olive Tree"?"

"No problem, here you go!"

Of course Huang Han wanted to give Shen Xiaorong's face, just a copy of the lyrics, so he immediately gave her a copy.

"Thank you! I really want to learn this song. Can I hear you sing it again?"

"The bell is ringing soon. I'm afraid I won't be able to make it in time. You need to be emotionally involved in singing. I can't sing well in a hurry. How about I sing it to you and everyone before telling the story at noon today?"

"Yes! You are right, I will definitely listen and study carefully at noon!"

When Shen Xiaorong left, Xiao Qiang was unhappy. She stretched out her hand and said, "Why didn't you give me the lyrics?"

"You don't seem to like singing, why do you need lyrics?"

"I also want to learn this song, and I have to study it seriously. Will you give it to me?"

The little Loli was about to fall out, so Huang Han quickly gave her a portion, which made her smile happily.

The school bell rang.

The first class of Classes 3 and 5 on Monday was Chinese. Teacher Huang decided to judge essays on the spur of the moment. The students were shocked when he started.

Because the sample essays were not from Shen Xiaorong, the top student and class president, as is common, but from the class next door, and there were still two essays.

Unconvinced and disdainful, the students in Classes 3 and 5 are proud because they are the champions of the third grade and basically take the first place in their grade.

But after Teacher Huang read Huang Han's composition, no one was dissatisfied, not only because the composition was indeed well written, but also because the author was the king of stories.

Next, Teacher Huang read Zhang Chunmei's composition and asked the students to discuss it and analyze it. She pointed out that although Huang Han's composition had smooth language, clear layers and gorgeous words, it lacked true feelings and should be slightly inferior to Zhang Chunmei's composition.

The students in Classes 3 and 5 were convinced. Shen Xiaorong was really hurt. She was proud and felt unspeakably sad when compared to her classmates.

After class, Teacher Huang made a special effort to learn about Huang Han's situation, and then discussed with Teacher Xiao Han: "That kid Huang Han has both good morals and academics, and he sets up a stall selling tea eggs in front of the cinema in order to make a living at night. We should help him. .”

"Teacher Huang, I have thought of it together with you. I have been thinking of a way, but I feel that I have no idea how to start. That child has a strong self-esteem. When I give him money and food stamps, he refuses to take them."

"That's right! Then we need to help him even more. You are the head teacher of Classes 3 and 4. You can ask the principal to apply for a subsidy for Huang Han for special poverty-stricken students. I will go to the principal's office later to report on this child's situation."

"Go to the principal?" Xiao Han, a young teacher who had just arrived, was a little hesitant.

Teacher Huang smiled and said: "It doesn't matter, just take these two essays to report the good news and ask the principal if you can send them to the editorial department of "Youth Literature and Art" in the name of the school.

Even if one essay can be published, it is a great honor for the school!"

After all, Teacher Huang has been teaching for more than 20 years and has rich experience. He knows that sending papers in the name of the school will be taken more seriously than personal submissions, so he came up with a good idea that may lead to a win-win situation.

Teacher Xiao Han's eyes lit up when she heard this. She was full of emotions and felt that she was so lucky. If she could really win honors for the school, she would definitely be taken seriously by the school in the future.

She quickly nodded in agreement, and just as she was about to leave, Teacher Huang said again: "I guess after the principal has read these two essays, you don't need to speak at all. He will definitely ask about the situation of these two children in detail. Then it will be natural for you to respond truthfully."

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"Yes! Yes! Teacher Huang, thank you!"
Chapter completed!
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