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Questions about the plot and some speculation and criticism from everyone

To be honest, I'm a little confused now.

When I was writing the outline, I wondered if I would be too slow to write this way, which led to the daily life before, and the golden finger appeared too late.

Later, I really couldn't think of any good idea, so I wrote it like this first.

As expected, some people think that water is going too slowly, and how many chapters have passed, the protagonist only pretends to be 13 with the children, and some people think that it is boring to watch too much in daily life.

There is no way, delete the plot and increase the rhythm.

Many of the designed daily routines are cut off directly, or just mentioned them, and then transition to the Five Shadows War as soon as possible.

Originally, the outline designed to be taken away by Madara, focus on writing about daily life with Madara, and confronting each other with Hei Jue, etc.

Then edit the notification and it's time to go on the shelves.

No. 1 or No. 5...

At that time, I didn’t have many manuscripts in my hand, and I was struggling with troubles every day, and then there was a plane on the afternoon of the 1st.

Forget it, why do you say this?

Anyway, it was quite sudden. In addition, in the next few days, I couldn’t calm down and write, so I simply pushed it to No. 5, which would have a few more days of buffering time.

Some people said that others put it on the shelves and they are all Kagao C plots. You are transitioning, who likes to watch?

That's right, I had two ways at that time, either gritting the bullet and writing daily life according to the outline, or deleting them all, continuing to speed up the pace, and directly writing the protagonist's plot as an adult.

I chose the latter, but I just didn't want it to be put on the shelves and was called a so-called miserable one.

As a result, I still didn't run away because the transition plot looked like water, but you can't ignore it.

For example, Madara's attitude needs to be explained, and it is probably taught that the protagonist should explain what he needs to explain, when Madara's reincarnation eye should be explained, and how to solve the hidden dangers in the protagonist's body.

If you talk less, a lot of people will question you. What's going on? You have a bug.

If you talk too much, you will become verbose. It looks like there is no nutrition at all, which is commonly known as water.

After all these have passed, in order to follow the plot, we have to lay the groundwork and explain from time to time what has happened and what changes have happened over the years.

I don’t want to write these things, but I can’t write them without them. I don’t explain anything. How do I write them later?

Then it became like this, writing about daily life and talking about water. If you don’t write about daily life, it’s also water.

Although I had some psychological preparation when writing the outline, I was still quite uncomfortable.

It’s not your reason, it’s mine. I don’t have enough writing skills, and I can’t write some unimportant plots concisely and concisely, and I don’t control the rhythm enough.

For this, it is my fault to be beaten to stand attentively.

But some people say that I wrote it on purpose and was going to fetch it and then ran away, or it was just a substitute. Is it a bit too vicious?

If you don’t write well, your grades will be poor. If you work hard to write, just to make a few meals?

This book is not a buyout, so what's the point of finding a ghostwriter?

To put it bluntly, more than once someone asked me to write a buyout article on other websites. It may not be much, but at least it is guaranteed.

However, Lao Wumeng is a person who is somewhat pursuing, and he is a little nostalgic and troublesome, so he left it alone.

So if I really want to make a lot of money, why don’t I write a buyout article? Why don’t I continue to write down the book when the 7,000-even-thousand-even-thousand-even-thousand-stop, but choose to finish it directly?

To put it bluntly, just go to the world and write hundreds of chapters, what money is there?

At that time, more than half of the book friends in the group supported Lao Wumeng to continue writing and go to other worlds to commit suicide.

But at that time, Lao Wumeng thought a lot and thought that the best ending in Naruto's world was the best ending, and it was also the best explanation for himself and for all readers.

So you can say that it doesn’t matter if you think water doesn’t matter, but you really don’t mean to deliberately water as the word “water”, just like this bad money, at least you can’t do it.

After talking about this question, let’s talk about the plot.

Some people say that nothing has changed in the past ten years of jumping in the middle, so that the protagonist can forcefully post back to the original plot, and ask why he doesn't go directly to the Shifeng Chuan.

I want to say that when the protagonist was young, some people thought it was small and had no sense of substitution.

Many people think the pace is slow and tired of watching daily life, so they deleted about dozens of photos and people in the middle, which is why you think it is fast.

If I write this deleted paragraph, I will be sprayed with water in another way, so it doesn't matter.

As for forcibly posting back to the original plot, I also quickly forward to the rushing wind. I don’t know if I’m crazy or you’re crazy.

Let me tell you this, there is no shit in my outline!

What original plot do you tell me where I came from?

I have left a foreshadowing for the result of the vortex clan, and there are even other foreshadowings that have not been revealed.

When the protagonist is not coming out to cause trouble, I can't forcefully change too many plots, right?

Some people also said that the previous one was to get the protagonist back to Konoha, and then...

I'm really... drunk too.

He asked people to target all kinds of things, and then licked his face and returned to Konoha to lead everyone to a well-off life. Are they cheap?

Also known as a Naruto...

From the moment the protagonist was taken away by Madara, Naruto had nothing to do with the protagonist.

The only thing that someone said is that he thought Sarutobi Hiruzen was disgusting!

Because that's how I designed this.

Regardless of what Kishimoto defined Sarutobi, as far as I am concerned, Sarutobi is a hypocritical and scheming guy.

The worst thing seems to be Danzo, but in fact, how much of Danzo is the blame for Sarutobi?

How many things did Sarutobi not do, explicitly or impliedly, handed over to Danzo, and then pretended to be aggrieved and angry afterwards?

He kept saying that he died for Konoha and even had honor.

Damn it, it's simply!

It was a miracle that Naruto had not turned black, it was all AB's fault!

So in this book, if you want to see Sarutobi is a good person, you can just click × and leave.

The protagonists, Danzo and Sarutobi!

In addition to personal senses, this design is also to give the protagonist the subsequent choices, sufficient motivation and explanation.

There is also the part where I went to the Rain Country. Some people think that the protagonist did nothing, so they just glanced at Nagato and then got two pictures of it.

I feel that I am really wronged.

This area has several functions. First, it is to describe what stage the war has entered at this time from the perspective of Nagato and his men.

The second is to let the protagonist show his skills and tell everyone that the protagonist is already very awesome, and to harvest the worship of Changmen and others.

In the original work, Nagato and his men decided to catch up and become disciples because they saw Jiraiya's battle.

So designing such a foreshadowing will also make it easier for the protagonist to come back and accept me.

3. All descriptions of the current miserable situation in the Kingdom of Rain, as well as the descriptions of the water escape of the protagonist of the Kingdom of Rain, which can exert stronger strength, are all paving the way!

This will determine the protagonist's subsequent choice.

4. Give Madara a reasonable time to cause trouble, so as to lead the mirror to the protagonist, and then notify Danzo at the same time to start intensifying the conflict.

When designing this plot, I felt that I was quite awesome, and many problems were solved at once, and the protagonist could also be used to pretend to be a wave.

Then it turned into a look at Nagato, and I took two pictures by the way. What a fucking thing...

Forget it, I wrote such a long time all at once, and I don’t know if anyone reads it.

Now I don’t know how to write it to be considered as unsatisfactory.

What’s even more interesting is that some people are now saying that they have written it before they are released, but they have no taste after they are released.

I just wanted to say what I did earlier?

If you came forward early and said that you wrote it well and that rhythm was good, would I use a series of panic to delete the outline and modify the plot?

After saying this, it seems that I am trashing the blame again.

Really, I can't change my problem even though I'm always there. Every time I read the comments, I feel relieved and tossed and turned and couldn't sleep.

It is obvious that every time I know that it is difficult to adjust everyone, there are always two people who make opposite suggestions. Who should I listen to? I can't help but doubt myself, thinking that it may be my own problem and I have to change it!

In the end, I was not pleased with both ends, and I deserve it!

OK, fast forward, fast forward, just write it like this, and then the plot where the protagonist really begins to rise and the delayed gold finger should also show its face.

I won't read the comments anymore.

I can explain everything I can explain whether water is water or not, and there is nothing to say.

Then it is time to write, write, read, read.

It is impossible for eunuchs, at least these things designed in the outline will be written later.

It may disappoint some book friends and fail to meet expectations. If you have the chance, I hope I can see you again.

Finally, I will summarize it. It is my fault for making mistakes. The hot chicken I write and the water I write, I am guilty.

Please show mercy to everyone. I can’t read the smoky comment area these days.

I've been dead for several days, now I'm fine with someone to delete it?

If you insist that I am controlling the comments, then I will admit it too.

Otherwise, when the newcomer saw that everyone was so enthusiastic, he would turn his head and run away immediately, for fear of being caught and pressed on the ground to get an injection.

2020.11.12
Chapter completed!
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