Completed.

This book is not long. It was released on March 17 this year and was released on May 1 (200,000 words). It will be completed today.

The book has 1.03 million words, and it is considered the part with fewer words in the book after it is released on Qidian.

Now let’s summarize the gains and losses, which is for the book friends of this book, and for themselves.

Let’s talk about the cause of the creation of this book.

Originally, I didn’t plan to write martial arts after I finished the martial arts book, but later I always felt unwilling to accept the fact that I didn’t write a martial arts book. I was not only sorry for the readers who supported me, but also for the editor’s support.

In addition, I later saw a series of posts in the backstage that advocated writing good martial arts stories with low martial arts, and the previous book, the leader wrote about the shortcomings of the final martial arts value, so I decided to write a martial arts book with low martial arts, small world.

Later, after several thoughts on the creative and setting, the book "I am the only one in the world" was created.

I don’t need to say anything about grades.

The comments from book friends are all kinds of comments, and each carrot and cabbage has its own preferences, I don’t want to say them.

I only talk about my feelings.

Let's talk about the settings first-

The setting was adapted after reading a post on the Internet discussing the division of the strength realm of the Jin Anhuang martial arts. Because I planned to write medium and low martial arts, the lowest level is ordinary martial arts, and the highest level is broken void.

After writing, let’s look at the setting of the great realm (both martial arts realm to breaking the virtual realm), there are no major problems. I feel that there is no need to set another title (that is, the first realm, the second realm, etc.).

However, the setting of the small realm seems to be a big problem now.

The setting of Qingshou, a good player, and a master (this setting is based on some posts and titles from the real ancient world. For example, the term Qingshou is the name of ordinary thugs in a considerable number of ancient regions.)

The biggest problem with this setting is that it makes the audience feel that the name is awkward and difficult to accept, and it is also easy to be confused with ordinary adjectives (good, expert).

When I write, I often feel that the description of small realms is inaccurate, which can easily lead to misreading.

Therefore, this small realm setting does fail. I will remember this and don’t make the same mistakes in the future.

Then there is the specific setting and description of power.

I think there is no problem with this book in the first part, but after writing it, I feel that I can’t write clearly about the realm of heaven and man.

One reason is that I later changed the small realm setting of the Breaking Void Realm (changing this involves the issue of outline route selection, let’s talk about it later).

The second is that I didn’t think enough about the realm of heaven and man, and I couldn’t finalize it when writing.

This problem can actually be solved by taking more time. I was just a little bit of a hurry to write in September.

Then, I want to explain the problem of setting the world background-

The world setting in this article is multiple worlds, not divided into upper and lower realms. At most, there is a difference in the richness of vitality and nature, but the difference will not be too big.

The Breaking Void Realm says that there are thirty-three levels of heaven, and the setting is to break a level of heaven with one blow, which is called the Breaking Void Realm's first level of heaven, and so on.

But there are definitely more than thirty-three in the small world, but three thousand, or three thousand to the power of the third power.

I feel very dissatisfied because this is not written out - if you choose another outline route, this setting will be used.

After the outline of this book was found after Ran Yuehua, the leader of Ouyang Ye gang, came to the Zhenwu Sect to invite reinforcements, I had two outline routes to choose from, one was an outline that only wrote one million words, and the other was an outline that had two million words.

Because the previous grades were too poor, I chose a million words outline at that time. (I didn’t have the confidence to hold on, and I accepted criticism for this.)

If you choose an outline of two million words, the plot of other worlds and Ouyang Ye’s world is connected, will begin from then on... Since all the book is completed now, I won’t say much more about this.

Let’s talk about the beginning.

The most criticized thing about the beginning of the first chapter is the retention of the junior sister, and some book friends find it very poisonous.

The beginning of this book is a lot of book friends criticized the plot of collecting flowers as a concubine.

I don't accept all the criticisms - I did not do well in the plot selection, and I can indeed replace these two paragraphs with a plot that is more accepted by readers. I agree.

However, whether I was trying to keep my junior sister at that time, or collect flowers as a concubine, I chose this in the situation of my protagonist at that time, and I would not accept refuting this.

We are all qualified to choose - that is not a certain result, a certain calculation problem.

Let’s talk about the conception and mastery of the plot.

The whole book was written until the plot of Ran Yuehua going to Yiling Mansion to set up a line. I felt that I had performed well at my own level, and the plot and rhythm were all the same. Of course, limited to the subject matter and my writing ability, how good or bad it is, that is another matter. I said, and only talked about my own feelings.

The following plot, until the battle with the sword maniac, was at my level, that is, it was written at the hidden level, and did not perform abnormally.

However, there is obviously something wrong with the part about the battle with Jianmao - there is no preparation, the process is too short and the end is too hastily.

Although there is a reason (I had stomach problems in September and I was still conceiving a new book), I did write this plot too poorly and I was not satisfied with it.

Even though the plot concept and expression in the subsequent plot did not perform abnormally, it was lower than the level you should have.

After talking about the plot, I will reflect on the character structure.

All along, except for the three eunuchs and the first book, I have all written about business forces, such as the principal, holy land, head, and the world.

Because I like novels about managing power, I write them.

Among these novels, the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin is the most classic.

However, compared to the requirements of this subject for writing ability, my writing skills are obviously much worse.

I won’t talk about the other books, just talk about this book. In addition to the protagonist, I actually performed well in the descriptions of Zhang Susu, Wang Zheng, Deng Kui and others, but when there were more and more protagonists in the future, I basically didn’t write them.

I was not good at writing at all, and it made his protagonists lose his color in the middle and late stages, which was the biggest failure in the character structure of this book.

In comparison, the structure of the villain has always been within my rightful level (except for the sword maniac).

Of course, even if I have achieved my due level, I am not outstanding in task structure as a whole. So, if I write novels about such business forces, I really have to think more and think about it.

All of the above are the failures of this book.

So what are the places I have done with this book? (Relatively speaking, I know that the book has poor grades, so please don’t blame it.)

First, although the rhythm is not outstanding, it is not messy. It is always in my own hands. However, the beginning is a bit slow for some readers. Even if there are two outlines in the middle, after choosing, and until the end, I have controlled the rhythm.

Of course, this rhythm is not well controlled, it can only be said that it has not lost control, so it needs to work harder and continue to make progress.

Secondly, there are no brainless plots (big poison points), but as an old reader, this is what it should be.

Third, in the early and middle stages, and even in the middle and late stages, I have performed well in the description of the fight scenes, especially in the early stage descriptions, which are quite straightforward and refreshing. This should be taken further and strive to excel!

I can't think of the rest, I know very well that the rest of this book is only qualified and ordinary.

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After summarizing the gains and losses of this book, I feel even more grateful to the book friends who have always supported this book.

It is probably because we are interested in middle and low martial arts novels and content similar to the real world of ancient China, which brings us into this book.

Of course, some are old book friends.

It is your collection, subscription and daily voting to let Cultivation persist in writing this book.

Otherwise, as a book that is 200,000 words and is available for less than 500 collections, it is really difficult for me to persist until I finish writing it.

Of course, there is also the editor’s support, including the editors, Shu Shu, Xingchen, and the front and back, which gave a lot of support.

Especially in September, October gave several good recommendations in a row - this even made me feel guilty because I was about to end this book at this time, and even October updates were all about fishing (one update every day, even insufficient).

Then, I want to name a few book friends-

First of all, the boss Qiesha, who supported the leader in this book, and this book also supported the elders.

Secondly, it is the support of old book friends such as Liberation Four-dimensional. I bring salt, my heart is broken and tears are dried. I idbeifeng, books are stuffed into my brain, and the support of old book friends such as Crazy Dragon and Wushen, as well as Xiao Zhefu, I can't use book friends, I don't know how to wait for the support of new book friends!

There are also many new and old book friends who are subscribed, voted, and commented to support them (it's hard to type your names here, it's very uncomfortable). Without your support, the world will not be able to even be in the capital of 500,000 without your support.

Thanks!

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At the end, let’s talk about the new self-cultivation book "I Can Turn You into NPC". It has been released for a week, with more than 30,000 words. I have been holding it in my mind and didn’t tell you about it before, just wanting everyone to finish reading the world.

Now that the journey of the world is over, a new journey will begin.

So, I hope everyone can collect the new book "I Can Turn You into NPC" and support it.

Thank you first for your self-cultivation!
Chapter completed!