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Chapter 1789 fog flower dream

Whether Xiaobai's Bai Xue can be successful or not depends on what he thinks it is, and whether it will be recognized by the market.

"I have been sharpening my sword for ten years, but today is the time!"

Xiaobai took the completed book "Fog Flower Dream" and showed it to Boss Mo who was squatting in the corner smoking outside the kitchen door for a look.

"What the hell?" Boss Mo only glanced at the cover and threw it away.

"Wipe you!" Xiaobai spat, quickly took the book back from the air, flipped through it, handed it to Boss Mo and said, "Have a look and give me some advice."

Boss Mo accurately flicked the cigarette butt into the trash can, impatiently grabbed the book and started reading.

He went from turning the page with just a few glances to slowly savoring it, and the corners of his mouth curled up unconsciously, but it was still very fast. In less than a stick of incense, he closed the book, handed it to Xiaobai, and took Xiaobai's hand again.

The second one handed over.

It took a full hour to finish reading the whole book.

"Every aspect is good, great progress has been made. It's just a matter of the character of the protagonist. First of all, that guy is not as great as you think. Changing "For the common people" to "being forced to be helpless" is just like him..."

"It's fiction, how can it be the same everywhere." Xiaobai said angrily.

"It can be false, but it cannot be too false. Excessive righteousness is too false. I don't deny it. Since ancient times, people have devoted themselves to their work and retained their loyalty. But if you want to write a book with these people as the protagonists, do you think it will sell well?"

"this……"

"Your theme is love, so there shouldn't be excessive righteousness. You are also a supporting role. The protagonist can be an upright person, but he must not be a person who gives up everything for the common people. You regard the two heroines as among the common people.

It's a good idea to be a part of the world so that he can understand this love, but you ignore that he himself is also a part of the common people."

The young boy blushed, and then said depressedly: "It's nonsense to copy or not, but this way the ending can't be a tragedy!"

"What's wrong if it's not a tragedy?" Boss Mo sneered.

Xiaobai said forcefully: "Love without tragedy cannot be unforgettable!"

Boss Mo's sneer grew louder and said: "As long as you are happy, let's talk about the heroine. I don't know what Fairy Scarlet is like, but I am sure that she is not Xue Baochai, and Ah Qi is not Lin Daiyu."

"What Xue, Lin, it doesn't matter, okay." Xiaobai blushed again.

"As long as you are happy." Boss Mo replied again, which made Xiaobai feel depressed for a while.

Boss Mo lit up a cigarette and said while smoking: "That guy is half of my informant."

"Huh?" Xiaobai stared at Boss Mo curiously.

"He took the initiative to contact me, but I didn't know about him."

"Oh!" Xiaobai suddenly realized.

"Many of the cases I solved were directly related to him, but I couldn't let him go because of that. I still had to arrest him because that was my mission. I should have followed through without hesitation. However, after I investigated

After he passed away, I felt very uncomfortable and didn’t know what to choose. I wanted to unload my burden several times for him. I had this escape mentality, and he also had it, and it was heavier than me!"

Only then did Xiao Bai understand why the boss's feelings towards the senior were different from what the senior said about Sir Yang and Officer Tang.

"There is no love between them..." After Boss Mo finished speaking, he suddenly denied: "Maybe there is. In Ah Qi's case, it's just that Ah Qi's memory has been altered. Whether it is true or not, we have no way of judging!"

After taking a puff of cigarette, Boss Mo continued: "He is not normal. Most of his male compatriots would only wish for it. But when Ah Qi faced him in this way, I only saw his disgust, so from the beginning he

He just wanted to break off the relationship, but Ah Qi's insistence made him at a loss. He should, no, I'm sure he had carefully considered this matter, definitely not just once, but many, many times, whether to stay together forever or whether to change his job.

Fa, you also saw the final decision, he escaped."

"Yeah!" Xiao Bai nodded in agreement, but for some reason, he felt that he was not facing Boss Mo, but a senior. However, he didn't care. It was more important to collect information, so he hurriedly asked: "What do you think his state of mind was at that time?

What's it like? Did you just leave because you couldn't figure out the truth?"

"Putting real and fake on someone's body is not as simple as two words!" Boss Mo raised the corner of his mouth and said, "Do you feel that I look a lot like him at this moment?"

"Uh... you said that, it's true. Just now I felt like I was talking to a senior." Xiaobai said with a bitter smile.

"I am good at simulating the behavior and mentality of criminals, but I can't imitate him. I can only imitate his appearance, but not his heart. There are too many people who have a worse fate than him. Compared to most orphans, he is very lucky.

He has an adoptive father who treats him sincerely and a similar growing environment to you and me. But because of this luck, he does not have the endurance of most orphans. When he loses it, his world collapses!"

"Alas!" Xiaobai sighed and suddenly didn't want to write anymore.

But Boss Mo suddenly encouraged him: "In addition to being righteous, the character you conceived is actually very close. He does look like Jia Baoyu who lost Lin Daiyu and encountered great changes in his family."

"At the end of the dream, all realms are empty!" Xiaobai took a deep breath and sighed.

"In his world, there is no longer any truth or falsehood, only fiction. The only motivation that can keep him alive is revenge. But his nature... It was his adoptive father who created his humanity and woven it into his only life, but he

Deprived of his reason for living!"

Xiaobai squatted down next to Boss Mo, grabbed the cigarette next to him, took out one and lit it for himself, and said with a wave of his head: "Don't persuade others to be kind until they have suffered! Even if I have the soul of my cousin to protect me, I will still plant the seeds."

He has all kinds of evil thoughts, let alone the senior who has nothing!"

"It's hard to find love for such a person, let alone righteousness."

"Oh, I suddenly don't want to write anymore." Xiaobai sighed again.

"Write, why don't you write? If you don't write, his life is not exciting enough." Boss Mo actually advised.

"What?" Xiaobai didn't quite understand. What does this have to do with the seniors' lack of excitement in life?

"There are many people who don't like him. Even if others say he is good, once you write him down, doubts and resistance will come one after another. The more this happens, the more people will stop what he wants to do. In the end..."

"At the end of the day, all realms are empty!" Xiaobai said.

Boss Mo smiled and refilled his cigarette.

"That's really a tragedy!" Xiaobai flipped through "Fog Flower Dream" and glanced back and forth at the five characters "Sword Seven" and "Red Fairy".

"But your ending must be happy for everyone." Boss Mo's words were like a needle pricking Xiaobai's heart!

"Harem article!" Xiaobai took a deep breath of cigarette.

"No." Boss Mo looked at him and denied: "Sword or red, only choose one!"

"What do you mean? Does this mean everyone is happy?" Xiaobai couldn't laugh or cry.

"There is nothing in the world that everyone likes. Even if it is money, some people hate it deeply, such as your senior."

"Just kidding... uh, it seems so!" Xiaobai thought about it carefully, and he really felt that the senior was not just a hater of the rich!

"Start it first, and then slowly change the story later."

Xiaobai understood as soon as he heard it, this is going to be serialized.

He couldn't help but take another long puff of cigarette, and his mouth was burned. He couldn't help but make a sound, which shows how weak his body is under normal conditions.

But he didn't care about whether he was physically weak or not. He threw away the butt of his cigarette and said with a smile: "Okay, even though he is one person, he has an independent personality in two parts. After all, he is the Empress Dada, Red Fairy, who once helped Young Master Liu conquer the world.
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