Mitsui Shiroya secretly looked at Xiaoliu. At this time, Xiaoliu was looking down at Mitsui Shiroya's manuscript. She did not notice that Mitsui Shiroya had noticed the bad things in the words just now. She didn't know that she was shy and embarrassed at this moment. Her whole face turned into a red apple, looking particularly cute. Fortunately, she would still have the chance to see it in the future, otherwise she would have really lost a lot.

Mitsui Fuye was relieved to find that Xiaoliu did not notice his strangeness. He thought to himself that it was really bad. He had been thinking about this novel about him, but he had never thought about how bad it was to use such misunderstandings at this point in time. Fortunately, Xiaoliujun did not continue to misunderstand. When he thought of Xiaoliu's slightly embarrassed just now, for some reason, Shuangye's mood was inexplicably good.

Mitsui Shimoye knew that Xiaoliu was reading the novel, and she watched it secretly, and turned into a gaze openly. Looking at Xiaoliu's face, she was waiting nervously. Xiaoliu's comments on his novel. This is his first novel, and I don't know what kind of comments will he receive from Teacher Xiaoliu?

Mitsui Futaba likes Xiaoliu's novels very much. Since childhood, I have read many novels, but I have never read such a special novel. It is so wonderful. It is the first time I feel that the author is such a powerful person. I have created a world, a world composed of words, and there is no false feeling. It makes people feel that it is real and a story that happened before. When I read it, I am often brought in at once. I enter that world and feel the scenery and excitement of another world.

It is precisely because of this shock and a few days ago that I suddenly realized that I had no dreams yet, so I quietly had the idea of ​​writing novels. I kept writing these days and found that it was really difficult to create.

The use of words, the structure of the story, the beginning of the idea, the composition of the world view. The distinctive characters, the words spoken by these distinctive characters, and whether psychological activities relate to the essence of this character.

Is it the first person, the second person, or the third person? Is it a real story of the real world, or a blurred world? What kind of subject matter is it?

There are many more things that novelists need to consider. These days, Mitsui Futaba met them. This was the first time she felt that creation was such a difficult thing. She had seen some new writers who worked hard, and publishing was extremely difficult, and Xiaoliu was right. The prospects of the publishing industry were getting worse every year, and even if the market was still there, it would gradually sluggish in the future. However, that's it. Xiaoliu still rose like a comet, almost a genius that has not appeared in ten years, shocking the publishing industry and becoming a super popular newcomer.

It is conceivable that the difficulty is very powerful. When Mitsui Duoba started and was about to write a novel, he suddenly realized that he had thought it was too simple, and the difficulty was just as difficult as climbing to the sky.

At this time, Xiao Liu, of course, didn't know Mitsui's Duoye's little thoughts. He was watching the novel she wrote.

This is a very subtle story. At the beginning of the story, there is a large description of the scenery and the use of very complex adjectives makes people feel that the writing style is particularly good.

But this also created a very difficult reading feeling.

For novels, this is very unfair, and it can even be said to be a taboo.

Seeing this, Xiao Liu frowned slightly. Of course, he would not immediately make a judgment on this novel because of this situation. A good novel must be read through the entire story before making a correct judgment. Of course, many people cannot stick to the end, because if the story is not exciting, they will give up halfway, but even so, they will continue to read a lot of words.

Xiao Liu continued to watch it. Xiao Liu watched it very quickly, but he was all about the progress of the story.

Soon, Xiao Liu finished reading this novel.

I have to say that this is indeed a very bad novel. This novel has many common problems with newcomers, and there are countless problems with them.

After thinking about it carefully, looking at Mitsui Duoye's expectant eyes, Xiao Liu said directly: "There are big problems in this novel."

"A big problem?" Mitsui Shiroye was shocked and felt a little disappointed. Is this denying her novel? She nodded, felt a little nervous, and said subconsciously: "Please continue."

For a novelist, the work is his own soul. If it is completely denied, it would be fine if it is an old man. Even if he is very conceited and thinks his work is good, he will look at this issue objectively.

But if it is a new author, there is not so much objectivity. Newcomers cannot see the shortcomings in the novel. In their opinion, their novels are very good. This is a subtle psychology, and their eyes are blocked. This is also the main reason why it is difficult for them to grow and succeed. They cannot find their own shortcomings, nor will they admit their own shortcomings.

If they read their novels again a few years later, they will find that this is simply garbage. The garbage made up of words is so eager to forget all of these words - they really have no use, and even memories are unnecessary.

However, now, not a few years later, as a new author, Mitsui Futaha is likely to have common mentality problems with other new authors. She is very confident in her novels and cannot see the childishness of the novel. Xiao Liu's comments will largely make her unhappy. I have to say that this is really a thankless thing.

However, after being asked, Xiao Liu had to complete it.

Xiao Liu did not hide or show mercy at all, and said directly: "It can be said to be a very bad problem."

"First, in terms of text, I wonder if you have read Hemingway's novels?"

Mitsui Futaha nodded and said, "I know that a well-known American writer, one of the most famous writers of the 20th century, has created works such as "The Old Man and the Sea" and "The Sun Rises As Always".

After Mitsui Duoba finished speaking, he asked, "What's wrong? Does my question have anything to do with him?"

Xiao Liu nodded and said, "It's still related. Shuangye, the most serious thing about your novel is to elaborate on it for no reason."

"Report it?"

Listening to Xiao Liu's words, Mitsui Futaba was a little confused and asked strangely: "What does that mean?"

"It's just that your novel is unnecessary, inaccurate, and there are too many inexplicable adjectives, which gives people a very sad reading feeling. Maybe you don't think so, but I think the problem in this aspect is really too big." (To be continued)
Chapter completed!