"I remember Hemingway once said this, for a work, adjectives are unnecessary. What a novel wants to express is the meaning and excitement brought by the story, and deeper thinking, which is not the so-called adjectives. Perhaps these adjectives will make people feel very gorgeous, but from a realistic perspective, it is simply a burden."

Xiao Liu said mercilessly: "Your novel has this problem. I remember Hemingway once wrote this sentence-"

"This is also a famous passage between the old man and the sea: the old man put down the fishing line, lifted the harpoon as high as possible, and used all his strength, plus the strength he had just plucked it down and pierced it straight into the side of the fish."

"Hemingway did not have any adjectives for this thrilling scene. He made the most straightforward, simplest, primitive, and roughest, but the effect was also the best description."

"You must not think that without adjectives, there is no writing style."

"The so-called writing style is the story of the article. With the combination of writing skills, the combination of the two is the so-called writing style. If a novel is made of gorgeous rhetoric, it may make people shine. So many strange words are indeed very powerful. The writing style is indeed very good. But for a writer, this is not a writing style at all."

"Writing style is the accuracy of words, the accuracy of description, the control of the story, the impeccable idea, the smoothness of logical order, the fluency and perfection of the text. If you can do these, you will be a good writing style in the true sense."

Xiao Liu said so much, paused and continued, "And you have committed this serious problem. You must know that you must understand that your novel is for readers to read, not for self-admiration, so you must let readers understand quickly. What is the story talking about? It is not a description of such a long scenery at the beginning."

"Maybe some real literary masters, even simple landscape descriptions, can easily see the background, the location, and even the style of the story, but unfortunately, I did not see these in your landscape descriptions. I only saw that you are simply describing the scenery."

"If it is an essay, your storyboard description will undoubtedly be very outstanding and you can even get full marks. However, if you put it on the novel, it will be completely impossible."

Xiao Liu shook her head and continued, "You must pay attention to this point. Fortunately, your text is pretty good. At least in many places, although it is repeated, it is at least described accurately. But the text is words and the story is stories. You must be able to distinguish them clearly. Perhaps some writers like to use adjectives, but they are completely different from you."

"The second question is your second question. Your story has not been understood by me, no depth, no intention, and no writing to readers what you really want to express. Moreover, the descriptions of some paragraphs are also inconsistent."

"This is your third question. The logical order of the text is very important. The content structure of the novel is mainly expressed in these logical orders of the text. The logical order of the text is also a twin called the logical order of the plot. You don't have the best of this. I have to say that it really makes me feel a little helpless. The logic of the plot is the arrangement of the story and the interaction between the characters, which makes me feel no sense of reality or substitution. I even feel a bit ridiculous and ridiculous."

After thinking about it carefully, Xiao Liu could only say this. Although it was harsh, it was very accurate and grasped the key points.

I hope Mitsui Duoye can listen, instead of disapproving it - Xiaoliu looked at Mitsui Duoye.

Although Mitsui Duoye showed a helpless look, she was at least thinking about the suggestions given by Xiaoliu, and was silent at this time, thinking about this issue.

Seeing this scene, Xiao Liu breathed a sigh of relief. At least Mitsui Futaha would accept it. Otherwise, if he didn't accept it, he would have said so much in vain.

Mitsui Duoye suddenly realized that Xiaoliu stopped talking, and it was obvious that she had finished speaking.

After thinking about it, she still asked, "Teacher Xiao Liu, how should I solve these problems?"

"Write more, think more, read more, and feel more attentively." Xiao Liu said directly without thinking.

This is the experience summarized by Xiao Liu in his previous life.

Listening to Xiaoliu's answer, Mitsui Shimoye nodded and said, "I understand, thank you Teacher Xiaoliu. It's getting late, so I'll leave first."

"Yeah." Xiao Liu nodded and looked at the clock. It was already eleven o'clock. Before he knew it, so long had passed.

Mitsui Duoye nodded and left Xiaoliu's room.

The door was closed, and Mitsui Shimoye had not left yet. After thinking about it, he opened the door, and then looked at Xiaoliu and asked, "Teacher Xiaoliu, thank you for your advice. I will not admit defeat. I will become a writer as good as Teacher Xiaoliu."

Xiao Liu smiled, nodded, and did not speak, but felt a little confused. He thought that he had not wasted his energy. After all, this Mitsui Futaha was a lady from a big shot. Although he had a common problem with a new author, he still preserved some reason and knew that Xiao Liu was completely wrong.

"That... can you help me read my novels again in the future?" Mitsui Futaba asked truthfully, looking at Xiaoliu with some desire.

Xiao Liu thought about it, but did not refuse, and it was also a supporter for the younger generation, and then nodded.

Mitsui Duoye immediately showed a happy and satisfied smile, closed the door happily, and then quickly left.

Xiaoliu looked at Mitsui Shiba leaving and couldn't help but murmur: "His father, if he knew because of me, she would become a "home" who was not doing her job, how else would she think?

I didn't think much about it. It was getting late now, so Xiao Liu went to bed.

The next day, Mitsui Twin Leaves left, and only Xiao Liu and Zhenbai were left in Qingxuanju.

It was so idle that I was too lazy to cook. Xiao Liu thought for a while and said, "Let's go out to eat."

Listening to Xiao Liu's words, Ma Bai's eyes lit up. Although he had been learning about cooking with Misaki for so many days, he gradually learned how to cook, but if he did it occasionally, he would be a little unbearable if he cooked it every day. At this time, he was naturally a little happy to listen to eating outside.

"What to eat? What is there to eat?" Shiina Mahara asked with her eyes lit up.

Xiao Liu thought for a while and said, "I remember there was a location where I just opened a French restaurant. Let's go eat French cuisine."

"I haven't eaten French food for a long time, well, let's go and have a meal." Shiina Masashi nodded with satisfaction: "Go away quickly, Xiao Liujun."

Xiao Liu touched Zhenbai's head helplessly: "What's the hurry? I'll change my clothes. You won't want to wear this pajamas. Go and change clothes quickly."

"Oh~ Change my clothes?" Zhenbai showed a troublesome look, then looked at Xiao Liu and asked, "Let Xiao Liujun help me change my clothes?" (To be continued)
Chapter completed!